JULY EVENING RAIN

GUYS i just need a feed back from yuh. I am working on some lyrics and manage to write some para of the lyrics on " july evening rain ". but i gotta little difficulty on managing the lyrics ...HERE YOU GO


It's raining, raining outside the window
and the each drop of the rain,seems lovely
this cool, july evening rain makes me feel like...
its a perfect evening i ever had.
but this is not my first time
to be experience this lovely july evening rain.

we used to be wet with each other
the each and every drop of rain
that hits gently to our face
this feels like there is anything to be enjoyed
 then this july evening rain.

do you remember?those kisses
we share with each other
it was really an awesome feel
during this july rain.
do you remember?
do you remember? the moment,
that birds were playin around,the trees,seemed like
they were havin a good timee with this july evening rain
and of course, that smell of mud
when it first hit to the ground.
do you remember???

jesus also remember tis july evening rain
and repeat the same fact again and again
it feels like, you are by my side
it feels like time has just arrived to our past
i wish the time repeat in this way again and again.

july evening rain! rain ! rain!
july evening rain ! rain ! rain!